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Promises

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Promises are wishful thoughts
in the dreams of the hopeless,
empty words filling up a glass that will never quench
the thirst for acceptance;
but just like the wearied cries for answers,
so too do the solutions
lose their meaning in repetition
and so continues the constant battle
to be proven of one's worth.
Just a little something I thought of last night. Feedback would be great :D Like, does it actually make sense or am I just talking rubbish here? haha
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xxsugarxx25's avatar
It makes more than perfect sense, you've found the words I wanted to say :) You read my mind. That's how good it is. Boing! Boing!